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The death of the king's canary
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On page 96, cut "You're a swell dame, babe," leaving "I cd fall for you': Too much Cornelius Americanim.
Page 109 "Seven day .... .... ?"
Top and 110 We must Say that Hodgson was a ... Otherwise, "bust" reads v obscurely
Page 121 Corbie's words must be made better
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Request to Leda
Not your winged lust but his must now change suit. The harp-waked Casanova rakes no range. The worm is (pin-point) rational in the fruit.
Not girl for bird (gourd being man) breaks root. Taking no plume for index in love's change Not your winged lust but his must now change suit.
Desire is phosphorus : the chemical bruit Lust bears like volts, who'll amplify, and strange The worm is (pin-point) rational in the fruit.
William Dudley