MSS_ThomasD_2_11_012

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Status: Needs Review

On page 96, cut "You're a
swell dame, babe," leaving "I cd fall for
you': Too much Cornelius Americanim.

Page 109 "Seven
day ....
.... ?"

Top and 110 We must
Say that Hodgson
was a ...
Otherwise, "bust"
reads v obscurely

Page 121 Corbie's
words must be
made better

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